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Still Life Grant M.
DIR By: Lord Grant Of House Miller
Date: November 4, 2016, 2:06 pm
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HTML https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9lJ15j8F0TIaUU4c2UxQk1uRnM<br
/>Enjoy my still life :)
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Re: Still Life Grant M.
DIR By: Taiera.Castaneda
Date: November 4, 2016, 4:02 pm
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your gun looks really nice! ^-^
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Re: Still Life Grant M.
DIR By: NissaT
Date: November 4, 2016, 4:51 pm
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I do think the gun looks nice but your still life looks
incomplete and flat. I think you should have taken the time to
add a background and maybe you should try three point lighting.
Your current lighting makes your scene looks flat especially
since there are no cast shadows.
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Re: Still Life Grant M.
DIR By: Stayd
Date: November 6, 2016, 8:51 pm
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As everyone else has said, your gun is wonderfully detailed, but
the other objects in the scene pale by comparison. The radio and
toaster in particular are very blocky and rudimentary, and the
gas mask is just a bit... off? It's hard to see the full shape
of it because it blends perfectly into the background, but it
doesn't look like it would be very comfortable to wear on your
head. I would say to use extensive references for an object that
complex (trust me, I had a gas mask in my Still Life last year,
too), and try not to spend so much time on one object that the
others fall behind.
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