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Still Life
DIR By: Brett Westenfield
Date: November 3, 2016, 9:20 pm
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So this my still life the objects i used is a Medicine bottle,
Crescent wrench, Screwdriver, Tool box, Rifle, and Gas mask.
Originally there was a poster on the wall but i didn't have
enough time to finish it, plus i didn't have a copy of
Photoshop.
LINK:
HTML http://brett-westenfield.deviantart.com/art/Still-life-643838645?ga_submit_new=10%253A1478223613
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Re: Still Life
DIR By: astrid_cid
Date: November 4, 2016, 3:27 pm
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I think you could've toned down your wall texture a little more
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Re: Still Life
DIR By: Raymond C.
Date: November 7, 2016, 2:46 pm
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Maybe have your gas mask propped up because I wasn't sure what
it was at first. Also the barrel of the gun looks a little short
and the stock a little long.
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Re: Still Life
DIR By: SarahSenpai
Date: November 10, 2016, 1:31 pm
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All the objects are modeled very well it's very clear what they
are, however this scene doesn't like grab my attention. maybe
different placement of the objects and different lighting would
interest the viewer more; overall wonderful job fam!
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Re: Still Life
DIR By: JakeTheGreat
Date: November 10, 2016, 1:44 pm
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I think from a technical standpoint (e.g. modeling, texturing,
knowledge of the program) I'd say you're very proficient. From
an artistic standpoint the image leaves a lot to be desired in
terms of visual interest. The issue, after a couple minutes of
thinking it over, is that the table looks artificially
populated. By that I mean that it looks like the contents
weren't placed during natural use, due to a lack of objects and
their relative placement. A good tip would be to imagine
yourself as a character using this scene. Where would you put
things down when you were done with them? Overall, I think it's
well done, but is just missing something I can't really figure
out.
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