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Cera's Still Life
DIR By: CeraPhillips
Date: November 3, 2016, 12:16 pm
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Re: Cera's Still Life
DIR By: SarahTucker
Date: November 3, 2016, 1:15 pm
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The wood looks really good! I think that the object might need
to be scaled up a bit to fit them, though. The design of the
Cala Lily looks complicated and I don't think I could have done
that so I'm impressed (though you could have put it at a
different angle to showcase it more). I believe that the leaves
would looks more realistic if you had used more than one color
on each leave (also add veins but that was already addressed).
In this light you cannot see the texture of the book (or maybe
you removed it?) but that does make the key stand out more. Good
job! [emoji4][emoji4]
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Re: Cera's Still Life
DIR By: Brett Westenfield
Date: November 3, 2016, 9:55 pm
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first time looking at it i though that pocket watch was a clam
or an oyster that looks purple.
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Re: Cera's Still Life
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: November 4, 2016, 12:07 am
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Getting to see everything up close now really helps to show more
of the quality of this piece. I like the pocket watch design a
lot, the clock and the upper lid of the watch are really well
done. The texture on the notebook make me think it's an actual
one that someone would use in real life. The leafs could use a
bit more work texture wise, but I do like how they are all
scattered around and aren't the same shape or sizes. The pencil
seems a bit fat and probably could be skinnier. Overall I like
this still life and you did a great job capturing watch a still
life is suppose to represent and that is its objects.
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Re: Cera's Still Life
DIR By: Raz
Date: November 4, 2016, 2:07 pm
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That wood is really good, how did you do that? The leaves could
use a texture with some veins that isn't just plain green to
make it look more realistic. Overall this is really pleasing to
look at.
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