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STILL life
DIR By: Bryce
Date: November 3, 2016, 12:15 pm
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Final version.
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Re: STILL life
DIR By: antponce
Date: November 3, 2016, 12:27 pm
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i like the posters in the back so it wount look so empty
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STILL life
DIR By: SarahTucker
Date: November 3, 2016, 12:56 pm
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I like the laptop, is the keyboard a texture or did you model
it? One thing I think you should have done is make the spotlight
less harsh and more spread out. It does bring more attention to
the gun, though.
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Re: STILL life
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: November 4, 2016, 12:14 am
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I like that you added in the little bottom part on the wall, it
helps to make it seem more realistic, however it isn't as far
down as it should be, because you can still make out part of the
wall texture under it. The posters/pictures on the wall are
nicely done but I would have liked to have seen them a bit more
spread out when it comes to their position, they are all in the
same exact position on the wall and having some lower or higher
would have made it a bit more interesting. I like the textures
on your fruits, they are very well done and likewise for your
gun. I like this piece overall, I don't have any major
complaints, just small things that you can do to make it a bit
more interesting.
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Re: STILL life
DIR By: astrid_cid
Date: November 4, 2016, 3:23 pm
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I like the way you lit up your lamp, makes it look more
realistic
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Re: STILL life
DIR By: Raymond C.
Date: November 7, 2016, 1:27 pm
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The posters sot of take your attention away to the actual items.
Also the way you portray your light, it doesn't completely fit
in with how much the bulb is out. With the amount of bulb being
visible, there should be a wider circle of light.
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Re: STILL life
DIR By: JesseMartinez
Date: November 7, 2016, 1:33 pm
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I like it but the poster that says "He's watching you" looks a
little to smooshed.
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