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finished still life
DIR By: DamianDavis
Date: November 2, 2016, 9:00 pm
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the image came from my own bedroom I have all the objects on a
tap
HTML http://imgur.com/awDbHrh
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Re: finished still life
DIR By: SarahTucker
Date: November 3, 2016, 1:33 pm
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I can't tell what some of your objects are but from what I can
they are pretty decently modeled. You also did a good job
emphasizing the objects instead of the background. The cup(?)
doesn't have a texture which makes it look really out of place
in the final. It also looks like it's just a cylinder with the
top off. It would be better if you used the revolve tool.
Another thing is that the numbers on the alarm clock(?) are
backwards which can be easily fixed with mapping. The phone is
relatively small compared to everything else. Finally, the
textures on the wall and table look weird. The texture on the
wall looks too big while the side of the table needs to be
fixed. Overall the wall and the table look to similar and
compositionally I would have made them different to better
differentiate.
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Re: finished still life
DIR By: DamianDavis
Date: November 3, 2016, 8:44 pm
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the cup was going to be see through but the shadow tool did not
want to work then the clock number I tried to trun them the
right way but it just did not work
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Re: finished still life
DIR By: ItsAll0ver
Date: November 3, 2016, 11:48 pm
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I like your models, the cup does look very plain in shape
though. I would definitely suggest adding more to it, and the
textures seem off to me. You have some very detailed textures in
the wall and table, but your objects are very flat. And have no
depth to them. Some of your textures are also stretched,
especially in the alarm clock. Overall very nice models, but the
textures definitely need more work.
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Re: finished still life
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: November 4, 2016, 12:00 am
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I would suggest resizing your wall texture, it is way too big
for a normal house. The key looks like it could use some texture
work, feels bland compared to all the other textured objects.
The clock has the numbers in the wrong places. I like your Sly
Cooper Xbox console, it's textured very nicely. Lastly I would
recommend having less wood in the scene because your wall,
floor, and table are all made out of wood. Adding in some
diversity would help the piece.
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