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       My Still Life WIP
       By: astrid_cid Date: October 31, 2016, 10:51 pm
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       Re: My Still Life WIP
       By: Shadowdragon Date: November 1, 2016, 2:01 pm
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       The textures and modeling are good, the composition is good (I
       think) the lighting is okay but not really that interesting, but
       the background is the main problem.  It doesn't really make
       sense for that still life just to be sitting on the floor.  In
       addition, is the skateboard touching the wall, because otherwise
       it shouldn't be able to stand up due to gravity.  The setting
       makes the still life feel forced and artificial.  My advice is
       you should focus on making the environment seem like the still
       life could actually be there.
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       Re: My Still Life WIP
       By: Jessilyn Date: November 1, 2016, 2:15 pm
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       I really love the bowl of candy. Very relevant. You might want
       to re-position the skateboard, since it's standing straight up,
       even though the back wall is so far away. Or you could bring the
       wall up closer so the skateboard is propped up against it.
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