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WIP Still Life
By: SarahTucker Date: October 31, 2016, 11:03 am
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Re: WIP Still Life
By: Tony Delarosa Date: October 31, 2016, 11:28 am
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I really love the camera angle of this still life, definitely
captures the focus of the objects. The crown looks really
pretty, I like the scepter, the red curtains in the background
look realistic with all it's folds. Looks like you're doing some
dynamics, pretty advanced stuff for a first year, hats off to
you. I would only suggest adding maybe a title on the book,
fixing the top portion of the candle holder (texture looks a bit
weird), the sailing picture I would suggest making the frame
less wide. Lastly maybe filling in the right bottom section of
the table with an object just so it doesn't feel so empty.
Overall I think it looks great, you have done a fantastic job so
far.
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Re: WIP Still Life
By: Jessilyn Date: October 31, 2016, 4:11 pm
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I absolutely adore the placement of your crown and scepter. This
is my opinion, but I think the crown would look cooler if the
gems were a different color.
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Re: WIP Still Life
By: Raymond C. Date: October 31, 2016, 6:48 pm
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I really like the placement of your objects. The chosen picture
for your picture frame looks great. My only concern is about
what the shadow on the curtain is being created from.
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