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cheryl's still life
By: CherrylFisher Date: October 31, 2016, 10:57 am
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Back from my long trip it is finally nice to sit and play a game
of chess against a worthy opponent, sipping wine and eating
sweets.
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Re: cheryl's still life
By: Tony Delarosa Date: October 31, 2016, 11:22 am
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First off I would suggest maybe another camera angle to focus in
more on the objects, I like the reflection coming off the
telescope and the table. The table is nicely textured along with
the chess set. The chairs need some work and the black/white
square wall could use some improvement. I like the wine glass,
and the fish tank is a cool idea but I would suggest making it
look like their is water in the tank, hard to tell at the moment
if their is. The telescope I would recommend filling in the
gaps, because I can see the inside of each layer and telescopes
aren't like that. Pretty interesting still life so far, I like
it.
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Re: cheryl's still life
By: Jessilyn Date: October 31, 2016, 4:15 pm
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Maybe move the camera up so you can clearly see all the chess
pieces. Also, the left chair looks a bit awkward.
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Re: cheryl's still life
By: Raymond C. Date: October 31, 2016, 6:32 pm
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The textures you used look really well. Maybe change the backs
of the chairs, the repetition of the wood doesn't look as
natural as the table and the rest of the chair. Also some of the
sweets look like they are on top of others and gravity isn't
pulling them down. Other than that, it looks good.
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Re: cheryl's still life
By: astrid_cid Date: October 31, 2016, 11:04 pm
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Your objects look great, but they kind of get lost in all those
dark colors.
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Re: cheryl's still life
By: antponce Date: November 1, 2016, 11:02 am
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its really cool but those chairs need to be fixed and a
different angle so we get a clear view of everything
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