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Seth Weeks - Work in Progress Still Life
DIR By: Seth.Weeks.Soup
Date: October 31, 2016, 10:44 am
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This is what I have so far. I was thinking to kind of add a
little more to the table on the left side is like a deck of
cards, or something along the lines of that. I think my camera
angle is a bit off and I believe the bump mapping needs to be
changed for the table. But overall I wanna say its a pretty good
work in progress. Is there anything that should be added or
taken away?
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Re: Seth Weeks - Work in Progress Still Life
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: October 31, 2016, 11:16 am
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I would suggest fixing the wall and floor textures. They are to
spread out, try playing with them in the UV editor and get them
to resize to fit the wall. The added images/posters in the
background is a nice effect but making them a bit smaller would
probably be a good idea, and they grab my attention more than
the actual objects in the still life. Try making the camera
focus more on the objects. I can't really figure out what the
yellow circle thing is, I'm guessing maybe a cheese wheel but
honestly I have no idea what it is. Improve the lighting a but
because it is hard to make out some of the objects on the table.
I like the addition of the DVDs and the grenade looks nice. You
have made a good start on it so far, keep up the good work.
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Re: Seth Weeks - Work in Progress Still Life
DIR By: antponce
Date: November 1, 2016, 11:01 am
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its good but i feel like the table is a bit crowded make take
that rwby thing out and the table is really low to the ground.
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