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Haunted house
DIR By: CherrylFisher
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:05 am
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HTML http://orig13.deviantart.net/9976/f/2016/281/1/9/creepy_hallway_by_cheryl20-dakafuk.jpg
The hallway was dark and frighting. So I whipped out my
flashlight and began to look around. Everything was silent and
only the floorboards creaked beneath my feet. I finally came to
the staircase. There only a single red light lit my path, but to
my horror someone was already waiting for me on the stairs.
Startled I just stood in panic waiting thinking what my next
possible will be....
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: BrayanO15
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:10 am
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I LIKE IT BUT IT COULD OF USE FOG TO MAKE THE LIGHT BETTER OR
MAKE IT SEEM LIKE IT WAS COMING FROM SOMEWHERE CUZ IT LOOKS LIKE
ITS JUST THERE FLAT WITH NO ILLUSTRATION.
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: CeraPhillips
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:28 am
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I like how the beam of light is almost showing what the shadowy
figure is, I also like your narration. But what is that white
dot in the upper right corner?
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: antponce
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:31 am
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with the bright spot light it looks more like a stage then a
creepy hall way i think if that light was a little bit less
bright it would have looked better
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: ItsAll0ver
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:32 am
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Interesting choice for textures, I like it though. But the light
source looks like its coming more from a flashlight (is it??)
then a single red light. And if the light is red then there
should be more red than just the small bit up top. Also your
lighting is too solid, and does not seem completely realistic.
Maybe add some kind of blur?
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: SarahTucker
Date: October 7, 2016, 3:16 pm
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It is a very nice image and I like the color scheme because
really adds a layer of suspense to it but I feel like the
flashlight light should have a beam leading up to it to add to
the illusion that it is dark. Also the white dot off to the side
is a little distracting but not a lot since you've done a good
job with your focal point.
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: Seth.Weeks.Soup
Date: October 7, 2016, 4:51 pm
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The way that you made this is very interesting. It makes me
think of something like Alice in wonderland, which on its own
can be very creepy. Let's be real Alice and wonderland is a
super creepy movie. But like the way the textures are make it
look very cartoony and there's nothing wrong with that. I really
like how the light in the middle is fixated on one spot on the
stair well, almost as if someone is looking down from the top of
the stairs. But overall its really nice, and I love it. ;D
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: Brett Westenfield
Date: October 15, 2016, 11:18 pm
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It look's great, but there this random light red circle on the
ceiling what that about?
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Re: Haunted house
DIR By: AggressiveOx
Date: October 17, 2016, 2:24 pm
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I like the angle of the camera but it could be pulled back a bit
more to give it a "never ending hallway" kind of feeling to it.
Also, the ambient red light is a little too much and casts
shadows in the wrong areas because of how bright it is, also the
fact that there is no source from where the light is coming from
and appears to just be spawning in different directions.
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