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Haunted Hallway
DIR By: Jessilyn
Date: October 6, 2016, 4:11 pm
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My hallway is home to a pool of blood accented in the ceiling
light, and the ghost of a hanging man, only visible in the light
of your flashlight.
Link here:
HTML https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1z9z-5N5-gEnk0tpokZQsXKv7mBW7nx6hVddiCQInvoo/edit?usp=sharing
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 6, 2016, 4:17 pm
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The light focusing on the main focal points (the blood puddle
and the hanged man) is great, and having the bottom of the
stairs more visible than the rest of the staircase is a nice
touch too.
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: DamianDavis
Date: October 6, 2016, 9:19 pm
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I love the hang part of it all I would do is have a smile in the
background
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: DragonKing14
Date: October 6, 2016, 11:16 pm
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Love the Idea and feel of the hallway the lighting is pretty
spot on as well. The one thing i have to say that bothers me is
the light bulb, for how much light it is putting out it dose not
glow very bright. Maybe add a little more white or yellow to it.
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: October 7, 2016, 2:48 am
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the spotlight does give a frightening look, but perhaps zoom the
camera in slightly
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: BrayanO15
Date: October 7, 2016, 10:27 am
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IT LOOKS AWESOME KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK WITH TEXTURING! ALL THE
DETAILS LOOK AMAZING
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: October 7, 2016, 10:31 am
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I really like your blood and hangman in your scene, it helps
make your hallway more spooky. I do however recommend you place
or vary your textures on your wall, stairs, and the pillar. They
all have the same texture and it makes the hallway boring to
look at. I also have a problem with the light on the hangman.
There is no indication from where the light is coming from. It
appears to be coming from the lamp hanging in the room, but that
wouldn't make sense because that already has a spotlight on the
blood. Zooming in would also benefit the scene because it's hard
to make out some of the items in the scene because the camera is
really far out. Maybe adding a painting, blood, or having
something on the walls would add more to the scene. Overall it a
nice haunted hallway, you did a good job making it.
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: Seth.Weeks.Soup
Date: October 7, 2016, 10:34 am
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I really like this one, it really gives that sad and depressing
feeling. The way the person is hanging in the background makes
it all the more interesting because you're not focused on one
spot in the picture. Also it looks like the light is coming from
upstairs which makes it look he (or she) is hanging from the top
of the stairwell and the blood is dripping down from above. The
texture for the ground really makes the blood stand out and
darkness blocking out the rest of the way forward really makes
it suspenseful. :D
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: Raymond C.
Date: October 7, 2016, 3:04 pm
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It does look really good. I really have no problems with it
except for the lighting. In you description, you said that the
hanging man is seen with you flashlight. But the light that
highlights the man, kind of combines with the light that
illuminates the blood and the whole flashlight concept gets
lost. But otherwise, it all looks pretty great.
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Re: Haunted Hallway
DIR By: 00ncruise
Date: October 17, 2016, 2:19 pm
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The hanging silhouette is a nice touch. Gives me the feeling
that I don't to be there.
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