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Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: Seth.Weeks.Soup
Date: October 6, 2016, 12:10 pm
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So this is what I call the red room. Its a place where people
are tortured for the entertainment of others. You can only
access these rooms on the deep web, they take a while to find.
(But on a real note, they aren't real fams.) But once you find
them, they are exactly what they are told about. Someone being
tortured for the entertainment of others. Its usually someone
they kidnap or someone paid to have a specific person in the red
room. This one in particular is inside a basement, where the
person is dragged down the stairs into their own demise. Once
you are taken down there you never some back out.
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: granthasnen
Date: October 6, 2016, 2:00 pm
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Very creepy. I just have 2 things I think need improvements, The
bump maps on your walls are too deep, and I think something
needs to be added in the scene to make it creepier like a chair
with ropes and a table of torture tools.
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: DamianDavis
Date: October 6, 2016, 9:22 pm
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I love that hallway
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: DragonKing14
Date: October 6, 2016, 11:24 pm
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like the style although i would say your textures are off. Your
bump maps are too intense and most of the textures are a little
to big to scale with the objects in the scene as if your wood
floor planks came from a tree the size of a tanker and the stone
bricks are just every so slightly too big for me.
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: October 7, 2016, 2:20 am
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the red light does make it more spooky, but maybe go a bit easy
on the bump map next time. ;)
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: BrayanO15
Date: October 7, 2016, 10:25 am
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I THINK IT LOOKS AWESOME. MAYBE ADJUST THE COLOR A LITTLE BIT
BECAUSE IT LOOKS REALLY BRIGHT RED OTHER THAN THAT IT LOOKS VERY
CREEPY
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: ItsAll0ver
Date: October 7, 2016, 10:36 am
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Very nice, love the angle. And the red ambiance really does it
for me. Honestly feels like I'm looking at a screenshot for a
horror game. Bump maps do need some work, but otherwise great
job!
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: Tony Delarosa
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:02 am
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First off your lighting is to intense so toning it down would
help, I like you added a bit of a backstory to your scene but
with what you described it doesn't look like a tortures room.
Having blood, tools, or body parts added would help give off
that idea but as it is currently stands it's just a red hallway.
I would suggest the wooden planks on the side of the wall be the
same as the boards on the stairs because the current texture is
to out of place for the scene. Lining up the stone on the pillar
with the stone texture on the wall would be a good idea as well
so it flows better. If I wasn't already aware of the hole in the
wall with the wood in it I would never notice it was there
because it gets lost because of the lighting and the stone
texture on the wall. Overall good job on the hallway, I would
personally recommend in the future not using a red light, but
that's just me. I do like how you textured your stairs, and your
wood floor boards.
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: CherrylFisher
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:23 am
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I like the back story for the hallway I gave you but I have to
agree that the bump wall is a tad bit much for my taste makes it
very stressed and makes me feel like i am in a bad video game.
but overall nice piece.
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Re: Seth Weeks - The Creepy Hallway
DIR By: Bryce
Date: October 7, 2016, 11:42 am
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It's really crazy how much the light can change the mood of the
entire image. It really does look like some torture room or
psych ward. I really like it man.
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