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My Still Life
DIR By: Ryan Bellais
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:19 pm
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HTML https://imgur.com/WOGAN3h
I'm Going for the "Nerd who just moved out of his Mom's House
Feeling", Room is filled with soda on the floor and a main focus
on the computer, the owner of this house clearly doesn't have a
job and needs to get one
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Re: My Still Life
DIR By: granthasnen
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:24 pm
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Looks great but I noticed a big problem. The window shows a city
from above (or i think it does) but there is a door outside.
Does that door go to a balcony or something? I cant tell.
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Re: My Still Life
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 6:51 pm
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I would add a bit more lighting, it feels like most of the
lighting is effecting the left side of the image, and the rest
is lit by the world light in maya. Don't be afraid to add more
than a couple lights, move them around to specific areas to give
some parts more focus than others.
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Re: My Still Life
DIR By: IndominusQ
Date: October 27, 2015, 9:29 pm
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I like it. Looks fantastic, the only issue I am seeing is that
there seems to be a lack of shadows in the image, especially the
round table. To me it feels like there could be a shadow coming
from the table. Another shadow issue I am seeing is that on the
table where the computer is, there is a shadow coming from the
soda can and a part of the shadow is on the keyboard. There
should not be a shadow on the keyboard as the intensity of the
light or brightness of it is reflecting on the keyboard heavily.
Other than those minor errors everything else is great. Keep up
the good work yo!
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Re: My Still Life
DIR By: JacobM
Date: October 28, 2015, 12:27 pm
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The project looks great, although you might want to smooth the
garbage/basket by the door and I also noticed the headphone
cable seems to disappear from the scene, not sure if that's an
aliasing problem or if it really disappears.
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Re: My Still Life
DIR By: Xendria101
Date: October 28, 2015, 4:04 pm
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Like
-I like the electronic glow emitting from the computer yet still
see the monitor
-I like the feeling that its more like an actually room in which
a lot of stuff is going on
inside of it
Dislike
-The rendered scene could be more high definition, it looks
unpolished
-Some important shadows missing on the chair and table, the
texture on
the rug is much to big
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