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(First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: HanayuZero
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:09 pm
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: HanayuZero
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:11 pm
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So I still have a TON to do still, and I rushed the camera
angle.. BUT I don't hate it! I picked items that related to my
childhood (Crown, Softball Bat, PS2 controller, etc.) Advice and
critiques are appreciated!! :D
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:28 pm
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I love your little books and the crown is so cute! However, the
textures on the wood table and shelf could be rearranged to look
a little more realistic. Also, the light source from the lamp
could be spread out wider and maybe make a broader light besides
it because, personally in my room, I have more lights on than
the desk lamp :) Can't wait to see the rest! :D
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: Thomas Jacobs
Date: October 27, 2015, 5:10 pm
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Try removing the shadows from the wall that way it doesn't look
like the lamp is shining through the table.
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 6:42 pm
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I like the placing of everything, however, i would move the bat
a bit more forward, as it feels too close to the wall, i would
also play around with camera angles and maybe the placing of the
shelf, as the image feels a bit too static.
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: B1ack_r0bin
Date: October 27, 2015, 7:56 pm
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It looks really good so far! :) One thing that you could do for
the final is turn the texture of the wood on the sides of the
shelf so that the grain is going up and down instead of side to
side. Also something I noticed about the green books in the
middle of the shelf (I'm guessing Percy Jackson?) it looks like
the texture wrapped around the top of the books where the pages
should be. Lastly ( I'm sorry my reply is so long!) because of
the angle of the screenshot, the legs of the desk line up with
the drawer in a way that kind of looks like there's a smaller
desk underneath the big one (that one might just be me). Keep up
the good work, I really want to see it fully textured! ;D
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: Stayd
Date: October 28, 2015, 12:48 am
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I really like the attention payed to some of the smaller
details, like the way the headset cord snakes off the table, and
how the books lean against each other on the shelf.
One thing that's bothering me is that the light from the lamp
doesn't seem to be casting any shadows, as it's going straight
through the table and onto the wall behind it (presumably, this
is because Raytracing either isn't enabled in your render
settings, or isn't enabled on the spotlight, which is easily
fixed).
Save for that, it's looking pretty nice so far.
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Re: (First Year Still Life) Aww Childhood.
DIR By: elliedust
Date: October 28, 2015, 12:48 am
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i think what texture you have has been done really well
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