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still life project
DIR By: rosita Howard
Date: October 27, 2015, 12:31 pm
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Re: still life project
DIR By: dlollie
Date: October 27, 2015, 12:54 pm
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The table is done very well, I'm not sure what some of the other
objects are. I recognize the easel and the coins, but not clear
what the other two represent. A soft shadow could help with the
objects placement on the table.
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Re: still life project
DIR By: magescuro
Date: October 27, 2015, 2:03 pm
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You have a very good color scheme going here, everything fits
together really well however everything is really square and not
that interesting or identifiable.
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Re: still life project
DIR By: Close_Up_Of_Brueno_Mars
Date: October 27, 2015, 2:11 pm
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I like the setup and looks of the models, but the textures need
some work, too much stretching
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Re: still life project
DIR By: HanayuZero
Date: October 27, 2015, 2:26 pm
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I really like you table, very nicely built. Though the texture
on it looks very stretched, so using your UV Texture Editer
would work wonders. I can easily recognize the coins and lamp,
but I'm not sure what the other two items are. Maybe the one on
the right could be placed a little differently, but I'm sure
once you add textures it'll be easier to see. Keep up the great
work friend!!
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Re: still life project
DIR By: Jordan Griffin
Date: October 27, 2015, 3:40 pm
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The lamp looks good, but it is hard to tell what the objects on
the table are.
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Re: still life project
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 7:02 pm
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I would either center the scene, or move the camera into a more
dynamic shot of your scene.
The modeling of your lamp and table are both very good, and they
feel like something that would actually exist in the real world.
I would add a little bump mapping to the table to give it that
wood grain feel, i would also turn down its reflectivity a bit,
as it looks a bit too shiny.
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