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Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: February 4, 2016, 1:20 pm
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Sorry it's not dark enough Dx
I'm going for a more cartoony style. My goal is to have the
drawings in the comic have a lot of movement so I need to
practice that... But questions? Comments? Concerns? :3
btw, any tips in cartoony hands
HTML http://pre13.deviantart.net/b793/th/pre/i/2016/035/c/3/frannie_doodle_by_blu_blood-d9qhsvq.jpg
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: Ace
Date: February 4, 2016, 1:24 pm
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"Frannie's eyes change color depending on her mood." The word
'mood' should be replaced with the word 'water'. "11/10" -IGN
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: throwguy
Date: February 4, 2016, 1:59 pm
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> "Frannie's eyes change color depending on her mood." The word
'mood' should be replaced with the word 'water'. "11/10" -IGN
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ur not funny
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: Ace
Date: February 4, 2016, 2:02 pm
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Ah lighten up. Being serious all the time is no good for
anybody. My posts aren't hurtin' anyone. They're just
distracting and, arguably, obnoxious.
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: Ace
Date: February 4, 2016, 2:06 pm
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Although, if it makes you and Morgan feel better, I'll offer
some actual advice.
Obviously the image would be better if it were finished. (Only
half of it was colored) Also, some parts weren't erased all the
way even though it looks like they were meant to. I like her
expression, as it helps to humanize an otherwise toonish
character.
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: February 4, 2016, 2:19 pm
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I guess I should put it in WIP...
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: Ace
Date: February 4, 2016, 2:21 pm
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If you intend on finishing it; probably, yes. Though if it's
just a rough sketch and you intend on it remaining that way,
then I see no issue leaving it as is.
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: February 4, 2016, 2:30 pm
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Oh, then I'll leave it here.
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: MattBirmingham
Date: February 4, 2016, 3:00 pm
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Just a tip, If you scan in a drawing and the lines are hard to
see you can bring it into Photoshop and use the levels slider
(ctrl + L) to make them darker. ;)
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Re: Okay, Frannie doodle :3 Critique me please?
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: February 4, 2016, 3:10 pm
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Oo! Thank you! I'll go try that :3
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