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#Post#: 79--------------------------------------------------
Still Life WIP
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 26, 2015, 3:40 pm
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I would appreciate it if you could critique what I have so far.
Just click right here!
HTML http://imgur.com/a/IPo2q
EDIT: New image right here.
HTML https://imgur.com/JANxwaZ
EDIT2:I got a new texture for the bat. How is it?
HTML http://i.imgur.com/NhdD44N.jpg
EDIT3: Added new pictures.
HTML http://imgur.com/a/TD9ap
The objects are
Toilet
Diamond ring
Suitcase
Glasses
Bat
Vase
I added an extra image for a close up on the diamond ring.
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Cearl
Date: October 27, 2015, 9:27 am
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maybe think about trying a diffrent camera view so we can see
all your items in one shot.
Lighting and materials are looking great though.
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: ANDREW_STOUGH
Date: October 27, 2015, 12:15 pm
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It looks great! I would suggest working on the bat a little
more. I feel like towards the top of the bat it needs more
bulkiness. i love the way you did the ring though. great job
though!:)
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 12:33 pm
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The lighting is really well done, the diffuse on the metal part
of the ring also looks very nice.
I would suggest smoothing out the sharp line on the front of the
toilet, make it more round, since it looks too pointy at the
front. Otherwise, you're lighting and textures are very nice,
good on yah.
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: dlollie
Date: October 27, 2015, 12:39 pm
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Great job on the ring, you might want to find a wooden texture
for the bat because it to close to the handle of the toilet.
just want to point out that with the lighting, it seems to form
a smile on the toilet and the ring is the nose and the glasses
the eyes, Ha!
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 27, 2015, 2:52 pm
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Changed the position of most of the objects and made the texture
of the bat a lighter tone.
HTML https://imgur.com/JANxwaZ
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: NissaT
Date: October 28, 2015, 11:41 am
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I think on your new picture the camera angle could be put at a
different angle. It cuts off some of the objects in a way that
is very distracting! Other than that I think your objects look
great as well as the lighting!
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 28, 2015, 2:52 pm
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Got a new texture for the bat. Any comments are appreciated!
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Xendria101
Date: October 28, 2015, 3:04 pm
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Likes
-The lightning of the picture is fabulous, a nice warm color
temperature
-The objects in the picture are modeled well including the
diamond ring, which is my favorite.
Dislikes
-The toilet could be slightly wider
- the camera angle on the first picture could be zoomed out a
little, so no object is cut out from the
picture.
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Re: Still Life WIP
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 28, 2015, 4:02 pm
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--- Quote from: R.A.Zirbes link ---
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> Got a new texture for the bat. Any comments are appreciated!
>
--- End Quote ---
I would curve out the end edge of the bat, it feels a bit
cylindrical, also, maybe bulge the bat very slightly.
I do like your texture, its well placed and from what i can see,
does not contain any irregular or ill fitted stretching.
Gj 8)
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