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rubes-goldberge-jmore09
DIR By: jmoreno09
Date: December 10, 2015, 11:35 am
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Re: rubes-goldberge-jmore09
DIR By: throwguy
Date: December 10, 2015, 12:50 pm
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First off, you animation is very well done! For your first time
animating, and the fact it was by hand, it was really good. I
was a little confused as to what the task was at the end though,
it looked like it sliced the watermelon, then after it hit a
fork over it? I'm not sure. So if you improved you camera work
and maybe timings of things, you would achieve a much clearer
result.
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Re: rubes-goldberge-jmore09
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: December 10, 2015, 12:53 pm
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This has good animation, objects and textures, but the end
result was a bit confusing (what was supposed to happen
exactly?)
Good job, though
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Re: rubes-goldberge-jmore09
DIR By: IanHutchison
Date: December 10, 2015, 3:04 pm
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Pretty great, pal. I think the first Dragon Ball moves a bit to
quickly given how the object hits it, though. Also the
watermelon looks really nice,
10/10
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Re: rubes-goldberge-jmore09
DIR By: NissaT
Date: December 11, 2015, 9:42 am
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I like your animation a lot! It looks very nice! I agree with
the end being confusing a bit. I think if around the end of the
animation if you really slowed down the camera or even made it
stop it would help the viewer see what the end result is! at the
end the camera sort of goes off and you see a lot more of the
back wall than your models. I would work on the camera angles
and speed! other than that I really like your animation!
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