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#Post#: 774--------------------------------------------------
Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: Raz
Date: December 9, 2015, 1:01 pm
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HTML https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cwETglOSQ8Y
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How did I do
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: granthasnen
Date: December 9, 2015, 1:17 pm
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I think that you should reduce or remove the squash from the
ball because the squash gives a cartoon feeling to the ball but
nothing else has that feeling. Also the ball bounces a bit too
fast near the end. Also what is the simple task being
accomplished at the end? I cant tell what it is.
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: throwguy
Date: December 9, 2015, 1:48 pm
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First off, great job! I really enjoyed this one because of the
dynamics you incorporated with it. Like what /u/granthanson
said, the ball had just a little too much bounce to it, but it
was a nice touch regardless. The environment of the scene felt
interesting too, it was very warm. I personally thought it was
out of place, but thats my opinion, see if others enjoyed it.
Thorough work throughout!
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: Raz
Date: December 9, 2015, 1:53 pm
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I would change the ball's stretch but saving mishaps makes it a
struggle. Maybe if I have time I can fix it before the due date.
If I am editing my scene again I could add a trash can for the
can to fall into to emphasize a certain recognizable task.
#Post#: 779--------------------------------------------------
Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: December 9, 2015, 2:08 pm
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I like the textures of the objects and the wall. :)
but maybe make some of the objects move a little faster
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: KyannaA-S
Date: December 9, 2015, 5:24 pm
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i like it, the textures look good and the play speed looks fine.
good job broskii
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: December 10, 2015, 8:56 am
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The only thing that looks a little off to me is when the ball is
thrown up and bounces. Everything else looks very well animated
and it looks like you took a lot of care to make them look like
gravity is really effecting them but the red ball feels a bit
floaty at that point, otherwise, its a really good animation.
#Post#: 794--------------------------------------------------
Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: throwguy
Date: December 10, 2015, 12:45 pm
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> The only thing that looks a little off to me is when the ball
is thrown up and bounces. Everything else looks very well
animated and it looks like you took a lot of care to make them
look like gravity is really effecting them but the red ball
feels a bit floaty at that point, otherwise, its a really good
animation.
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It's dynamics
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Re: Rube Goldberg Machine Animation
DIR By: jmoreno09
Date: December 11, 2015, 9:18 am
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The only thing that got me was the boards where the ball bounces
up to are just flying. Other then that nice job.
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