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Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: 3DForumAKG
Date: December 7, 2015, 2:39 pm
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this is the link to my Rube Goldberg assignment:
HTML https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=12bOdDuhWd4
-Adrian K. Golden
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Re: Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: Raz
Date: December 7, 2015, 2:45 pm
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Nice sound effects and camera angles.
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Re: Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: Xendria101
Date: December 7, 2015, 2:53 pm
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Likes
- I love the quality of the animation. For the most part, it was
pretty good
-The modeling of the object was great as well
Cons
-At the beginning of the Goldberg, sound effects were choppy
- The animation of the car needs some work, especially since it
was falling. It needs to fall faster and needed a louder sound
effect when it hits the ground.
Good Job on the Goldberg, and keep improving!!!
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Re: Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: throwguy
Date: December 8, 2015, 1:52 pm
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This is astute work! The animation was really nice, but just a
couple things: The car falling down could have been faster, it
seemed to float in the air. Also when it hits the bottom, it
could have done a few bumps to combat the fall, like as if you
dropped a ball it would bounce back up sort of thing. The music
and sound effects are a big bonus, it was a very nice touch.
Great work!
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Re: Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: Zac
Date: December 8, 2015, 1:55 pm
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It looks really good. If I had to pick one think to critique on,
I would pick the end. when the strawberry is dipped in
chocolate, I think having a few drips of chocolate would make it
seem more realistic.
Other than that, nice job!
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Re: Here's my Goldberg project
DIR By: jackjonesie
Date: December 11, 2015, 1:01 pm
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You did a great animation! Your models look clean and perfectly
cut. And you added sound too! My only thing that bothers me is
how some of your objects get affected by one another, like the
marble being pushed by dominos. The dominos look like they
would fall on top of the marble instead of shooting it forward.
Just focus a little bit of detail on the chain reactions. But
it still looks amazing and out of the box! :o
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