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Re: First-Year Still Life Project
DIR By: BluBlood
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:20 pm
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I like the textures on the bedframe and the fabric textures for
the sheets and pillows. I wonder if you could have that blanket
on top flow over the bed instead of being a flat slate? Mess
with the vertices to get a rippling effect. :) Second, the
camera looks nice, but perhaps make it smaller like to-scale so
it isn't this GIANT camera. I also like the notebook and pencil,
they look very realistic :)
#Post#: 156--------------------------------------------------
Re: First-Year Still Life Project
DIR By: AntiGarrett
Date: October 27, 2015, 4:26 pm
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Looks pretty good! The camera on the dresser could be slightly
smaller. and the blanket on the bed could drape over the sides.
Everything else looks good!
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Re: First-Year Still Life Project
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 27, 2015, 6:46 pm
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The picture frame feels a bit too square, maybe add some
beveling to its edges to give it a bit more detail. the left
wall also feels a bit empty, you could either play around with
the placing of the objects a bit more, add something in (if the
assignment allows that) or play around with the camera angles to
hide some of its emptiness.
The lighting is very nice, and the bump mapping really helps to
add some detail to the image. The shadows look pleasing to the
eye and do not distract from the scene.
Good job!
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Re: First-Year Still Life Project
DIR By: NissaT
Date: October 28, 2015, 11:02 am
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Thank you so much everyone for all the feedback!! Here is what
I've fixed so far. I would appreciate more critiques on the
changes I've made. :)
HTML http://orig02.deviantart.net/cd25/f/2015/301/4/0/4042e2a6e66b88b016b4f223674d819c-d9eo51t.jpg
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Re: First-Year Still Life Project
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 28, 2015, 3:57 pm
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> Thank you so much everyone for all the feedback!! Here is what
I've fixed so far. I would appreciate more critiques on the
changes I've made. :)
>
>
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I like the blanket, but the walls still feel a bit empty and the
picture frame a bit too plain.
add some beveling to the frame and maybe make it slightly
larger.
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