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First year still life project Final draft
DIR By: B1ack_r0bin
Date: October 31, 2015, 2:29 pm
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Here is the final draft of my still life. Although its not
perfect I'm pretty content with how it turned out. Feedback on
how it looks and what I could do better would be appreciated.
Hope you guys like it!
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Re: First year still life project Final draft
DIR By: JacobM
Date: October 31, 2015, 3:07 pm
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This looks amazing. The only thing I noticed is the
[shadow=cyan,left]shadows[/shadow] are a little jagged and the
clock may be a tad too [glow=green,2,300]bright[/glow], other
than that it's spot on.
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Re: First year still life project Final draft
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 31, 2015, 3:35 pm
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it looks nice, i like it.
Big thing is the lights are kinda bright and have a little too
much glow to some of them.
your textures are really well done though, i must say.
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Re: First year still life project Final draft
DIR By: jackjonesie
Date: October 31, 2015, 4:38 pm
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The models and environment looks well done but It would be nice
to see the game case better, also the lights have a problem as
the wall behind the screen is affected with light that would not
happen if a screen was admitting light toward the empty space of
the room or objects in front of it. Over all good models,
textures, and glare effect. ;D
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Re: First year still life project Final draft
DIR By: Evilparty
Date: October 31, 2015, 8:34 pm
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I think it's a little dark and the ps4 is a little sharp, and
the some spots are to saturated other than that the textures are
really good good job.
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