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       Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: AggressiveOx
       Date: October 30, 2015, 3:10 pm
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       Hello everyone! :)
       This is my final for the Still-Life assignment! I had added more
       light into the fish tank to try and express more things in it
       since there is a castle in there (however, the castle was not
       cooperating with me). I also sharpened the wallpaper on
       Photoshop so it did not look as blurry. Lastly, I added a little
       volume light under each fish to give them a little glow.
       Thank you! :)
       P.S: If it's not working, here is the link:
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: Zac
       Date: October 30, 2015, 3:42 pm
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       First off: This looks like it's from a horror game.
       Secondly: If I had to critique on one thing, (which I do), I
       would say that the fish tank could use a bit more materials in
       it. Such as more coral.
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: Rum0r
       Date: October 30, 2015, 5:05 pm
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       Looks nice, it has character to it, the camera has a dynamic
       angle which helps push the image along, and your lighting is
       very well done.
       Only thing i don't like is the texture of the wall, it looks a
       bit blurry and low-res.
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: NissaT
       Date: October 30, 2015, 6:05 pm
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       I really like the idea! the camera, colors, and lighting is
       really dynamic and interesting to look at.
       though some of the the textures look a bit low res and also on
       my screen the scene is very dark and makes it difficult to see
       any of the models properly even when i turn my brightness all
       the way up a lot of the scene is pitch black. Maybe adding a bit
       more light to make you're scene a little more visible would
       help. I'm sure there's a way to keep it dark and spooky while
       still being able to make out what the scene is!
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: IanHutchison
       Date: October 30, 2015, 9:45 pm
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       Really enjoy all of this, but the low textured wall isn't too
       good.
       I like this a lot though, really love the lighting, especially.
       gives it a very spooky scary atmosphere, (especially the jack o
       lantern)
       I have to give it 7 out of 10, there aren't any skeletons,
       though.
       no just kidding great job!
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: JacobM
       Date: October 31, 2015, 1:05 pm
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       I really like the atmosphere to this scene, and although I do
       agree that the wall is too blurry I also noticed that the
       texture on the clock seems to be pretty blurry too.
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: Evilparty
       Date: October 31, 2015, 8:40 pm
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       It has great character to it but I think it's just a little to
       dark, but good job.
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       Re: Mariah Schlosser - Still-Life FINAL
   DIR By: DragonKing14
       Date: November 1, 2015, 4:55 pm
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       well done very creepy. The only major issue i have with this
       scene is the fish maybe put another kind of fish of a different
       color or shape.
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