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Still Life Final Turn In
DIR By: Raz
Date: October 30, 2015, 3:09 pm
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HTML http://i.imgur.com/xNt1wGY.jpg
I think I did pretty good overall.
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Re: Still Life Final Turn In
DIR By: AggressiveOx
Date: October 30, 2015, 4:47 pm
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I do like how silly this scene is. :) My favorite part would
have to be the coin on the back of the toilet along with the
tile and lighting.
What I'd say would be an improvement would be the aligning of
the toilet handle. I feel like it's a bit slanted and too far to
the center.
Hope that helps. :)
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Re: Still Life Final Turn In
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 30, 2015, 4:58 pm
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I like it, the camera angle is nice, your models are well made,
and your textures look very well done.
good work broseph 8)
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Re: Still Life Final Turn In
DIR By: jackjonesie
Date: October 31, 2015, 4:55 pm
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Its a +A, you have top notch models and textures and a perfect
lighting system it will pass, but there are two things you could
have done to make it a settle bathroom with props. #1 thing that
is missing is more bathroom props for the room, aka the wall
next to the toilet is too empty that you could have added a roll
of toilet paper. I didn't stick with my models for my scene as I
added a poster and wall camera. #2 is minor, the glasses look
empty with no glass, you could try giving it some reflectivity
to light to show glass is in it. But no worry as lighting and
models are well down for pass!
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Re: Still Life Final Turn In
DIR By: Evilparty
Date: October 31, 2015, 8:32 pm
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Overall it looks really good but I think the bat dose'nt slim
down enough at the end it looks a little fat, but other than
that good job.
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