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First Year sill life
DIR By: DragonKing14
Date: October 30, 2015, 3:05 pm
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HTML http://i.imgur.com/XNadPow.jpg
This is my final Render I would love feedback
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Re: First Year sill life
DIR By: AggressiveOx
Date: October 30, 2015, 3:16 pm
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I really do enjoy looking at this scene. It has a warm and cozy
feeling not to mention safe because of the gun above the
headboard. :) I also like the lamp and the light coming from the
lamp.
The thing that I'd critic on would have to be the window out
looking the city. I would suggest another kind of picture for
it. It looks like just another framed picture until you figure
out that it's a city out a window.
Other than that, this is amazing. :)
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Re: First Year sill life
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 30, 2015, 5:12 pm
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Everything is very nicely modeled, but to me, the colors are in
a bit of a competition, which makes the scene feel unnecessarily
cluttered, even if your items are nicely organized.
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Re: First Year sill life
DIR By: JacobM
Date: October 31, 2015, 1:20 pm
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I really like how this looks! I've got no critiques on this that
aren't already said.
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Re: First Year sill life
DIR By: B1ack_r0bin
Date: October 31, 2015, 4:28 pm
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It looks really good! One thing that seems off though is the
headboard of the bed extends out behind the bookshelf. (At first
I thought it was done on purpose but then I noticed that the
wood on the bookshelf and the back of the bed were different
colors, so now I'm unsure.) The other thing is your NES. There's
nothing wrong with it itself (it looks awesome) its just that it
looks like you spent the most time on it and then you put it in
the background. Maybe if the NES traded places with the
bookshelf it would be easier to see the amount of effort you put
into making it. But overall I love this whole scene, it just
feels so inviting.
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Re: First Year sill life
DIR By: Evilparty
Date: October 31, 2015, 8:36 pm
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I think you should have put something on the spins of the books
other than that everything is very well done good job
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