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critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: go_to_guy_24
Date: October 30, 2015, 3:03 pm
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here is my final still life and a link to the imgur critique it
please!!!
HTML http://imgur.com/gallery/YQrx6yy
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: Rum0r
Date: October 30, 2015, 5:14 pm
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It looks really interesting, and i would like to know whats
going on, but there is a bit too much going on at once in the
image, and a lot of detail gets lost.
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: Evilparty
Date: October 31, 2015, 8:44 pm
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You should add a bit more light in my opinion other than that
good job
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: ezequiel_153
Date: November 1, 2015, 4:57 pm
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I like the theme of this still life the models look well
made.The only thing that's really bothers me is that the rims
and the pistol are too reflective and are reflecting the texture
of the walls and it looks weird to me. Also the scene could be
brighter its kind of hard to make out what some things are, but
i do understand what you were going for with the lighting you
have already.
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: DragonKing14
Date: November 1, 2015, 5:07 pm
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very cool but there is to much going on and i cant tell what is
what and how your lighting and textures are everything looks
like its made out of similar materials.
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: SarahSenpai
Date: November 1, 2015, 9:07 pm
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I'm diggin this, I get a first person shooter, about to go
destroy some peeps on the dancefloor vibe. I like the objects in
your scene they're nicely done, the textures are kind of off
putting it's a real 700's disco feel. But overall, goood show!
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Re: critique me!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still life
DIR By: go_to_guy_24
Date: November 2, 2015, 1:16 pm
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for all who didn't know since I didn't put it in at first (sorry
bout that) it's meant to be the setting of a 1980s mobster house
about to be attacked by the police and the mobster is ready for
a fight. and on the comment about the gun being reflective I
actually have the gun fully set to lambert that's the texture of
the gun itself.
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