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       Re: Writing Challenge: Day 2
       By: Truman Overby Date: July 10, 2019, 9:25 am
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       [quote author=Alharacas link=topic=1211.msg17747#msg17747
       date=1562768229]
       Jerry, the translation I got from google is a bit cryptic:
       1. Hello
       2. Where are you?
       3. Your Name
       4. I'm Steve
       5. Sleep on you
       "Sleep yon you"?  ???
       [/quote]
       Google Translate doesn't handle Georgian well. 2. Who are you?
       3. What's your name? 3. My name is Steve 4. Good night
       #Post#: 17875--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Writing Challenge: Day 2
       By: Chizuko hanji Date: July 12, 2019, 4:02 am
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       1.  Is my body is too big as an insect? what do you think?
       2.  I don't know. You are smaller than me. It's enough. Anyway,
       why do I have the wings? I've never flown. It's strange.
       
       3.  Hey, can you fly with your big wings? I can fly anywhere.
       4. Yeah, I know it! That's what I'm wondering. Don't disturb my
       meditation.
       5. The owl was nosy. Does he have a nose in the first place? By
       the way, how can I lie down on the bed? These wings are
       annoying...do I need them? seriously?
       Narration:
       You should have the right things that you just need to survive,
       otherwise, you will be anxious and insomnia. Relax and be
       simple.
       #Post#: 18029--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Writing Challenge: Day 2
       By: Nikola Date: July 14, 2019, 4:25 pm
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       Disclaimer: I am correcting this because no one else has done it
       so far but I am a very slow, unreliable corrector. Feel free to
       correct my correction. Some letters are not capitalised but
       should be. I didn't correct them because it does not bug me, no
       pun intended :)
       [quote author=Chizuko link=topic=1211.msg17875#msg17875
       date=1562922139]
       1.  Is my body [s]is[/s] too big for an insect? what do you
       think?
       2.  I don't know. You are smaller than me. It's enough. Anyway,
       why do I have the wings? I've never flown. It's strange.
       
       3.  Hey, can you fly with your big wings? I can fly anywhere.
       4. Yeah, I know it[sub]1[/sub]! That's what I'm wondering. Don't
       disturb my meditation.
       5. The owl was nosy. Does he have a nose in the first place? By
       the way, how can I[sub]2[/sub] lie down on the bed? These wings
       are annoying...do I need them? seriously?
       Narration:
       You should only have [s]the right[/s] things that you
       [s]just[/s] need to survive, otherwise, you will be anxious and
       suffer from insomnia. Relax and be[sub]3[/sub] simple.
       [/quote]
       1. I'd say "I know!" or "I know that!"
       2. "How can I lie down?" would be asking for advice before
       attempting to lie down. "How come I can lie down?" works better.
       3. To be simple = to be stupid. "Keep it simple"? Maybe?
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