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       Final Draft
   DIR By: sarafredrick
       Date: April 7, 2014, 6:58 am
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       Re: Final Draft (reply to sara fredrick)
   DIR By: Carly21
       Date: April 7, 2014, 12:27 pm
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       - I really liked this memoir! I enjoyed reading it because it
       was something that I could relate to. Going to a completely
       different environment is a huge life change. I also didnt get
       along with my freshman roommate when I originally thought we
       were going to get along very well.
       - I liked how you included your memories of before getting into
       Michigan state and the emotions you felt when you were looking
       for other schools. It amplified the emotion when you got in and
       it let the reader know how excited you were and how much it
       meant
       -I thought that it was very well organized. You talked about
       alot of events and emotions but you talked about them an
       appropriate amount. Not too much or too little about them
       - I liked how you used the negative experience with your room
       mate that you used to your advantage to find new friends.
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