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       memoir rough draft
   DIR By: poppsar1
       Date: March 24, 2014, 7:57 am
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       Attached is my rough draft
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       Re: memoir rough draft
   DIR By: Laisures
       Date: March 24, 2014, 8:27 am
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       I like the story so far!
       when you are talking about striking the 1st girl out, you lose
       the intensity when you just say strike three. You could add to
       that and be like, "Just one more. One more strike and she was
       out. I positioned myself one more time....." I think it was keep
       the intensity going.
       love this line, very funny.
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