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       Taylor's final fantasy story
       By: mcevill7 Date: March 2, 2014, 6:29 pm
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       "The Tier" Final story attached
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       Re: Taylor's final fantasy story
       By: ruther50 Date: March 4, 2014, 11:02 am
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       From the beginning, I always loved the concept of your story and
       how it ties into real world problems like crime and violence. I
       think the story overall was great! I noticed that you did add a
       lot of sensory elements into your story and great descriptions,
       which really helps and adds to the plot. The only thing I would
       have done differently is have Javc not go down so easily in the
       end, since he was the leader of everything I thought he would
       have put up more of a fight, I just would have expanded on the
       ending more. But I loved the story and ending very much, you did
       a great job! :)
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