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Equivalence (Final)
By: Caldw127 Date: February 28, 2014, 3:54 pm
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here you are.
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Re: Equivalence (Final)
By: ellacaudill Date: March 1, 2014, 9:23 pm
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I like how the protagonist was not necessarily a hero and had
flaws, it really set it apart from the typical dystopian story.
I was just wondering throughout the story if people had jobs and
if even families with low scores could have jobs? Also when do
people stop taking the tests? And what about people that don’t
have children, what is their fate? There also could have been
more sensory descriptions included to make the dystopian world
more imaginable. Overall it was really interesting and a unique
dystopian story and it was really well written!
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Re: Equivalence (Final)
By: prestelo Date: March 3, 2014, 11:11 pm
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You used a lot of descriptors which really set the scene and
gave light to the characters. It was great how the show don’t
tell concepts were used through the proctor’s dialogue. I do
find it a little odd that their reentering Adonis went
uncontested but thought the use of DDT was an interesting twist.
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