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       Fantasy Final
       By: ellacaudill Date: February 28, 2014, 3:19 pm
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       Fantasy Final
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       Re: Fantasy Final
       By: prestelo Date: March 3, 2014, 11:19 pm
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       The split of the world was really interesting and I enjoyed the
       juxtaposition of the two societies. I do feel that there were a
       lot of things involved that were unnecessary or could’ve been
       grouped into one (ie sorcerers, hunters, healers, witches,
       mortals [this segregation just gave the reader a lot to keep
       track of within a relatively short story]). I also liked your
       battling scenes, they were descriptive enough to let me picture
       what was happening.
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