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       Fantasy Final
       By: prestelo Date: February 28, 2014, 3:06 pm
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       Fantasy final attached
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       Re: Fantasy Final
       By: ellacaudill Date: March 1, 2014, 9:24 pm
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       You had really good imagery and sensory descriptions. There was
       mentions of magic but it could have been more interesting if it
       would have played a bigger part in the story and to make it more
       fantastical. I liked the ending a lot but I think the beginning
       could have gone into further detail about Jonathan and this
       curse brought on the town to make things clearer.
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