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       Lycanhrope(fantasy) final
       By: halljam4 Date: February 28, 2014, 2:42 pm
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       Here's my final draft of my story hope everyone enjoys.
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       Re: Lycanhrope(fantasy) final
       By: prestelo Date: March 3, 2014, 9:32 pm
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       I like how it was an ongoing quest and that you included the
       history of that quest as thorough context. It did get a little
       confusing at time since it changed tense to tell the story. Felt
       that you did a fair amount of showing, not telling through your
       action scenes, which were well written and easy to picture due
       to the amount of descriptors.
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