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       Kiersten's Final Fantasy Short Story
       By: ruther50 Date: February 26, 2014, 5:41 pm
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       Final story is attached in a word doc!
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       Re: Kiersten's Final Fantasy Short Story
       By: mcevill7 Date: March 2, 2014, 6:43 pm
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       Really liked your final draft, and made many improvements on the
       story line. The plot was creative, and interesting. Some things
       I still might work on was making Greyson and annie's love more
       believable, give more detail about how he felt and how she felt.
       There were also some parts you could have described with more
       detail, like how nervous he was for his test. One more thing I
       would have liked was more descriptions of what the new plant
       looked like.
       Overall though, this was a great story and kept me interested
       about what would happen to Earth.
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