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Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 2:24 pm
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It may end up more than three if we manage to get awesome enough
But for the moment three
And psychic abilities would be awesome, like her being some sort
of oracle.
That would be a good idea
And creature attacks at the beginning would be good, because
then it would provoke a question like 'why was I attacked' and
would give a perfect opportunity for the leader to explain
#Post#: 71--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 2:37 pm
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I think that three would be sufficient.
but moving on
So they are attacked by the creatures, and I'm thinking that we
have one of the females take them out, and then rush them to
where ever the leader.
Also where are we going to have the leader, and what are the
Girls connection to him/her.
#Post#: 74--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 3:04 pm
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It's been mentioned that Ila is good with a bow, so she could
probably take them out and not actually show any emotion
The leader could either be a good friend, or depending on the
girls situation she could have helped them out and they owe her
a debt, or see her as a mother type feature
And for some reason I can imagine her living inside a hollow
tree
#Post#: 75--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 3:10 pm
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That's exactly what I was thinking okay so after she takes out
he creatures they get into conversation about what those
creatures where.
I'm thinking we have one of the Girls explain what they are,
However I think we keep it a secret as to why they are attacking
him, until they meet the Leader so that way it will be
mysterious as to why.
#Post#: 78--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 3:19 pm
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Yeah
So the girls not what the creatures are, but they don't know why
they attack who it is they attack. Maybe they've noticed that
it's always 'new' people they attack
#Post#: 80--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 3:20 pm
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How often do new people get abducted to that world?
#Post#: 82--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 3:22 pm
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Not often, but the few that do end up there are quite a novelty
so people tend to remember them and tell their children stories
about them (most end up highly exaggerated)
#Post#: 83--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 3:30 pm
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Okay so Lets continue.
So Ila kills the creatures and they enter into conversation,
then we'll have one of the girls say something about moving
along and they can continue on to the Oracle, that's what we'll
call him/her though I'm leaning more towards the Female gender
for the Leader. We'll fast forward to when they get to the
Oracles house , Which I'm thinking will be sort of like a hut or
something like that.
#Post#: 84--------------------------------------------------
Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 3:37 pm
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Sounds like a plan to me
We'd have to see what the oracles character is like before we
actually get around to deciding the actually nature of her home
(I agree that female seems better, I mean a guy leading a group
of girls would get dodgy knowing me).
Once they get their I can imagine her checking to see if Kyaoran
has any wounds, then explaining where he is. Then he'd mention
the creatures and she'd explain that they are the planets
'guards'
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 3:42 pm
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I just thought of the perfect character to base our Oracle off
I'm thinking Onin from the Jack and Daxter series except with
out the ponty ears,
heres a picture.
HTML http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140529163514/jakanddaxter/images/thumb/a/af/Onin.png/260px-Onin.png
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