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Plot Discussion Chapter 1
By: gracedragon Date: July 17, 2014, 6:17 pm
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This is Where discussions about the Plot will take place
The Plot
After a seemingly normal day, Kyaoran Naniki found his life
changing as he stepped into a peculiar ring of mushrooms and
lost consciousness.
When he awoke, he found himself in a place he didn't recognise,
surrounded by three girls, with other girls watching him from
afar.
After their introductions, the girls informed him that he was
trapped in a realm that he didn't belong, and unless he either
returned home or fell in love with one of them within six months
he would die...
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 10:52 am
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Okay so Gracedragon how do you want this story to start off? I
want to get an idea of where you want to go with this knovel.
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Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 11:14 am
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Starting off it's just Kyaoran on his way to work. He decides to
take a walk through a nearby park and next thing he knows he's
waking up in an odd places with the girls (minus the leader)
They take him to the leader where she tells them that because
he's from a different world he must either go back home, marry a
resident of that world, or die within x amount of months
It also comes to light that there is an evil entity that will
stop at nothing to prevent him leaving or marrying any of the
girls
Does that make sense at all?
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 11:35 am
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Yeah it makes sense, but we should come up with a motivation for
why the entity wants to stop him.
Also How do the girls know that he has to fall in love with one
of them in order to not die, and why will he die if he doesn't
A return home or
B Fall in love
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Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 11:41 am
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Well, it's the leader that knows because she knew a pair of
twins that came to their world. One returned home and one died
Then there was one who came through, married and fathered a
child and he never died
But it's mainly the leader that knows this
And the reasons are unknown but the most common theory is that
the world itself sees the newcomer as an infection and tries to
kill it off. Once it has married, the 'infection' is neutralised
and the world no longer wants to kill
And we shall find out about the antagonist once it's made/I can
find some time between drawing and writing
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 11:50 am
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Well then how about instead of the girl informing him.
We have the Leader tell the girls to retrieve hi, and then the
leader informs him about what he has to do.
So the world is a living being, then what if through out the
story we had creatures that try to eliminate him. It would be
sort of like white blood cells defending the human body from
invaders.
It would also make more sense to have the creatures attack him
rather then just have him die from an infectious disease,
because that can happen to anybody.
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Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 11:56 am
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[quote]They take him to the leader where she tells them that
because he's from a different world he must either go back home,
marry a resident of that world, or die within x amount of
months[/quote]
That was the hope XD
THE CREATURES WOULD BE AWESOME!
That way, anyone around him is also in danger until he makes his
choice.
I'll find someone who can design creatures
What were you consider? Humanoid, Feral? Two legs or four legs
or something else...
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 12:01 pm
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I think we should have a variety, since there are a variety of
cells that are a part of the immune system
I'm thinking there should be a variety of these creatures.
I was thinking that the first creatures he meets should be weak
so I'm thinking small four legged and feral.
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Re: Current Plot
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 12:02 pm
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Yeah
So a mix between bipedal, quadrupedal and snake like beings
I shall add the role of 'creature designer' to the list
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Re: Current Plot
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 12:11 pm
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Alright ^-^
Also Gracedragon I think we should take out the six months time
factor, because it would just make more sense for the creatures
to be the things that possibly kill him off. Also the whole
Falling in love thing I don't think that fits into the tory very
well. We can have him fall in love with one of the girls as he
is going on his adventure, but in my opinion forcing him to
either fall in love or go home doesn't really make sense.
We can have the planet still try to attack him since he is still
an outsider, but what if as we get further along in the story he
saves the planet or something and he is no longer considered an
outsider. I haven't worked out all of the details yet though for
this idea.
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