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Chapter 1 Script Development
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 4:47 pm
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This is where we will develop the script
and Make pie ^-^ -Sammesunshine
Apple pie? ~Gena
Pfft... Why not gooseberry pie? Of blackberry? - Gracedragon
Fine... >.> ~Gena (Wait, what's gooseberry pie?)
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 4:56 pm
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Okies
So the first bit would be Kyaoran taking a short cut through the
park
For those bits, we'll need thoughts, but should they be read
out? Also. What sort of things should he think to himself
And should he introduce himself
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 4:58 pm
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Im using my phone now so my replies maybe slower guys.
Anyways I think the thoughts shoulda be read aloud
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 4:59 pm
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It would make it a lot easier to understand
For thoughts, I think the text should be in italics
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: Gena Date: July 18, 2014, 5:02 pm
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Perhaps a short monologue about their story, like in the first
episode of Ouran High School Host Club?
WHY DO YOU PEOPLE TYPE TWENTY TIMES QUICKER THAN I DO?! I type
this, and then there's two new posts...
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: Sammeusnhsine Date: July 18, 2014, 5:15 pm
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Mm I dun think so because our character does know anything about
the world he's been taken to
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: Gena Date: July 18, 2014, 5:24 pm
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I mean about himself, not about what happens in the story. Just
so we get to know him a bit.
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 5:27 pm
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Maybe something where he's having a monologue while waking up in
the world
Like
"Ugh, my head hurts. It feels like something split it in two. I
don't get it, I only took a shortcut through the park,
blablablah."
Then have the introductions when he notices the three girls
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: Gena Date: July 18, 2014, 5:30 pm
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Yeah, exactly! And maybe he's pulled out of his thoughts by one
of the girls poking him with a stick and going "Nope, you were
right ____. He's alive."
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Re: Chapter 1 Script Development
By: gracedragon Date: July 18, 2014, 5:30 pm
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Who should be the one poking a stick?
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