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#Post#: 923--------------------------------------------------
yellowtail
DIR By: skane
Date: May 12, 2011, 9:52 am
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Character Name: yellowtuial
Gender: shje-cdt
Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner?): windclamn
Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine Dragon/med apprentice
unless you are making up their clan/tribe): werroiore
Appearance(Must look realistic): prettuy
Personality: awoemse
History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Blazing Hearts or
Shining Souls from outside the clan they need to have done so at
under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put in
a history and go this route with it!):
Notes/Other:
#Post#: 925--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Dragon Master
Date: May 12, 2011, 10:32 pm
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--- Quote from: skane link ---
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> Character Name: yellowtail
>
> Gender: gurl
>
> Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner?): windclamn
>
> Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine Dragon/med
apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): leader
>
> Appearance(Must look realistic): yellow fur with green dotts
>
> Personality: awoemse
>
> History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Blazing Hearts
or Shining Souls from outside the clan they need to have done so
at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put
in a history and go this route with it!): was born in yellowclan
then died and came back to life then weentk to wundclsn and
become leader and loved my all thr clamn
>
> Notes/Other:
>
>
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OK. A few things I would like you to change.
Leader's must have 'star' as the last part of their name.
Cats cannot have green dots and or yellow fur.
Please try to use complete grammar. If you need help, please
consult our writing school.
Last thing, There already is a leader. Please choose a different
position...
Thanks!
#Post#: 927--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Eaglesong
Date: May 18, 2011, 12:46 pm
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--- Quote from: skane link ---
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> Character Name: yellowstaer
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> Gender: gurl
>
> Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner?): windclamn
>
> Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine Dragon/med
apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): leader
>
> Appearance(Must look realistic): purrpel hair and blu esyes
>
> Personality: awoemse
>
> History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Blazing Hearts
or Shining Souls from outside the clan they need to have done so
at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put
in a history and go this route with it!): was born in yellowclan
then died and came back to life then weentk to wundclsn and
become leader and loved my all thr clamn
>
> Notes/Other:
>
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Hey there, Skane. I'm Eaglesong. Could you change Yellowstar
back to Yellowtail? My cat, Sorrowstar, is the leader of
WindClan. =) And her fur can't be purple. And her history can't
be that. Please fix it. =)
#Post#: 930--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Dragon Master
Date: May 18, 2011, 4:20 pm
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Thanks Eagle. Please change it.
#Post#: 933--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: skane
Date: May 19, 2011, 12:57 pm
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i fixced ity
#Post#: 940--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Dragon Master
Date: May 22, 2011, 7:45 pm
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--- Quote from: skane link ---
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> Character Name: yellowtuial
>
> Gender: gurl
>
> Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner?): windclamn
>
> Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine Dragon/med
apprentice unless you are making up their clan/tribe): rukler
>
> Appearance(Must look realistic):
HTML http://happyzenpet.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/tie-dyed-rainbow-cat.jpg?w=390&h=472
>
> Personality: awoemse
>
> History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Blazing Hearts
or Shining Souls from outside the clan they need to have done so
at under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put
in a history and go this route with it!): scame ftrom starclajn
anhd jhad tio gho ti windclanbm
> Notes/Other:
>
>
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Skane. A correct form would look like this;
Character Name: Yellowtail
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: (What Clan/ Tribe? Or a loner?): Windclan
Rank(CANNOT be leader, deputy or medicine Dragon/med apprentice
unless you are making up their clan/tribe): Warrior(Or Medicine
Cat or Medicine Cat Apprentice or Deputy)
Appearance(Must look realistic):
HTML http://www.catpicturescatpictures.net/cat-picture-red-hair-alasam.jpg
Personality: awoemse
History(Not needed; --CAUTION! To have joined Blazing Hearts or
Shining Souls from outside the clan they need to have done so at
under 6 moons old! Note this on the bio if you choose to put in
a history and go this route with it!):
Notes/Other:
Please change it.
#Post#: 944--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Eaglesong
Date: May 25, 2011, 12:33 pm
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Skane, please change it. A warning will be issued if you do not
correctly follow the rules.
#Post#: 946--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Eaglesong
Date: May 25, 2011, 12:42 pm
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You have been issued a warning. Watch it.
#Post#: 947--------------------------------------------------
Re: yellowtail
DIR By: Wmcd
Date: May 25, 2011, 5:52 pm
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Due to rudeness and such(OR whatnot) Im removing the post...
And Eaglesong, if something like this happens again, please dont
hesitate to do the right thing! (Though i know you wouldn't!) :D
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