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The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: Sarah von Sapata Date: July 15, 2015, 4:12 am
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I bring forth a story touched by God! The glorious tale of Goose
Muffin and Mr Potato on their quest to clear their names! There
will be a few more parts but it's not an entire novel. Plus this
I wrote in one sitting, and haven't really altered much so there
will probsbly be mistakes and it probably will not be as good as
I previously said, as to be touched by God, but just read it! I
was bored! :D
Part 1 - Below
Part 2
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Part 3 - Still to come!
PART 1
Goose Muffin rolled out of bed as he heard a noise coming from
downstairs. He hobbled down, and flicked the light switch on. To
his dismay, there stood Mr Potato gobbling up the last of the
ice cream. Mr Potato stopped, swallowed and attempted to hide
the empty ice cream bucket behind his back, but what Goose
Muffin saw, he could not unsee. "That was mine!" He complained.
Mr Potato looked down, ashamed. Goose Muffin sighed, and walked
over to the fridge. His small goose-eyes scanned each level,
looking for something appealing to eat. Upon the third tray, lay
a packet of glorious gummy bears. Goose Muffin's eyes lit up,
his tummy sung with excitement and he knew, this was the snack
he would eat!
Mr Potato watched as Goose Muffin took out the glorious gummy
bear packet, opening it slowly. Epic rays of gold shone upon his
face, as his hand dug into the packet, grasping a handful of
heavenly gummy bears. He tossed them into his mouth, as flavour
broke out inside it. Mr Potato was in awe, at the utter
perfection of these gummy bears and reached for his own handful.
The two sat in the dimmed light, eating such wonderful
creations, as the moon shone high in the lilac sky[sub]1[/sub],
surrounded by trillions of small sparkling stars.
Suddenly, the ground beneath them shook. A glass window
shattered, as 3 giant[sub]2[/sub] gummy bears lept through it,
spraying flames everywhere with their shiny new flamethrowers
that SHE[sub]3[/sub] had given them. One of them yelled in a
raging voice, "YOU HAVE CAUSED YOURSELVES A BURDEN FAR GREATER
THAN ANY CAN COMPREHEND". The gummy bears had burning red eyes,
much like the furniture in Goose Muffin and Mr Potato's
once-humble abode. "YOU MUST UNDO THE UNDOABLE, REVERSE THE
IRREVERSIBLE, AND SAVE THE UNSAVEABLE" the gummy bears screamed,
surprisingly all in sync.
Mr Potato's first instinct was to bow down to them, expecting
the Potato God to show up behind them but it was not so. The
gummy bears swung their flamethrowers round, jaws wide open as
they screeched and roared, setting Mr Potato's fedora on fire.
Goose Muffin was in shock, and stood upon the table, jumping up
and down and waving his hands pointlessly. They both looked like
idiots, to be frank. The gummy bears stopped for a second, the
only sound heard was now the two victim's screams. And then the
gummy bears continued, slowly turning and running out before
they vanished, leaving a scene of destruction. Mr Potato rolled
around the floor in agony, but Goose Muffin calmed him down and
noticed a scroll, left by the gummy bears. It read:
Goose Muffin and Mr Potato,
Upon the grounds of murder, for murdering innocent gummy bears
and placing them in such pain as to make them endure the stench
of your mouths, I hereby sentence you to death!
Don't panic, there is another way. (I'm very kind you see) To
save yourselves, you must go to the mountain of ALICHSIKDHKIHDFH
and retrieve the golden sceptre which you will then bring to me
so that I may make all right. The journey will be treacherous,
but I don't really care, just do it. Or you'll die. I will send
my most trusted advisories to aid you on this quest, but only
when you need help. Now go forth! You must save yourselves, for
I wish not to dirty the blade of my axe!
Most royally,
The Master King Person Thing Of The Gummy Bears
And so began a long journey for Goose Muffin and Mr Potato, to
clear their names of such terrible crimes!
[sub]
1. Yes the sky was lilac
2. Since gummy bears are usually very small, giant is actually
roughly the size of a young child
3. SHE is a mysterious, not so mysterious, you'll probably guess
it's me, I mean what?, character that commands the gummy bears
and is their protector. [/sub]
#Post#: 25027--------------------------------------------------
Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: GRACETHEDUCK Date: July 15, 2015, 4:38 am
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I'm already loving it. Like ERMERGERSH MORE!
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: TheCyclonicStorm Date: July 15, 2015, 8:27 am
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This captures the essence of craziness.
However, I was really confused when I saw small numbers to the
bottom-right of some words.
Citations and references are supposed to go above, not below.
::)
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: Sarah von Sapata Date: July 15, 2015, 8:51 am
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Apologies. I am sorry my work was not up to your standard.
I kid. :P
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: HunsingerTheLearner Date: July 15, 2015, 9:01 am
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Yes, you are a kid.
Oh, and the story was great by the way. You just need to add
more . . . I'm hanging . . .
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: Sarah von Sapata Date: July 15, 2015, 9:08 am
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More shall come soon! MWAHAHAHAH!
But for now, take a moment to remember the poor gummy bears that
were swallowed during this tale. We will miss them deeply, and
they died knowing they were loved. ;(
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: TheCyclonicStorm Date: July 15, 2015, 9:24 am
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[quote author=Hunsinger The Matist
link=topic=157.msg25050#msg25050 date=1436968899]
Yes, you are a kid.
Oh, and the story was great by the way. You just need to add
more . . . I'm hanging . . .
[/quote]
But you're the same age!
[quote author=Sarah Von Sapata link=topic=157.msg25046#msg25046
date=1436968289]
Apologies. I am sorry my work was not up to your standard.
I kid. :P
[/quote]
You're not sorry? I am offended.
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: HunsingerTheLearner Date: July 15, 2015, 10:46 pm
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[quote author=Sarah Von Sapata link=topic=157.msg25055#msg25055
date=1436969327]
More shall come soon! MWAHAHAHAH!
But for now, take a moment to remember the poor gummy bears that
were swallowed during this tale. We will miss them deeply, and
they died knowing they were loved. ;(
[/quote]
Yesh!
*starts wailing* Waaaaaaaaaah!
[quote author=TheCyclonicStorm link=topic=157.msg25058#msg25058
date=1436970278]
[quote author=Hunsinger The Matist
link=topic=157.msg25050#msg25050 date=1436968899]
Yes, you are a kid.
Oh, and the story was great by the way. You just need to add
more . . . I'm hanging . . .
[/quote]
But you're the same age!
[/quote]
That doesn't matter. I could be 6 years old and still say to an
11 year-old that they were a kid.
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: GRACETHEDUCK Date: July 16, 2015, 4:07 am
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[quote author=TheCyclonicStorm link=topic=157.msg25043#msg25043
date=1436966858]
This captures the essence of craziness.
However, I was really confused when I saw small numbers to the
bottom-right of some words.
Citations and references are supposed to go above, not below.
::)
[/quote]
Pssh, it doesn't matter.
Well maybe it does but it's not like we need to worry about
those petty things as of the moment.
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Re: The Adventures of Goose Muffin and Mr Potato!
By: Sarah von Sapata Date: July 16, 2015, 6:01 am
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Mmm. I plan to have the next part finished by Friday, and
Saturday at the latest. Not sure, it depends actually... I get
creative spurts and then I become very critical of any stories I
write. XD
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