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Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Quins-Az
Date: January 29, 2020, 7:01 am
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Hi fellow Quins fans,
I have written a match report on Sundays game on my blog:
HTML https://www.arunlakhani.co.uk/the-mighty-quins-harlequins-saracens/
Enjoy
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Nico Wilson
Date: January 29, 2020, 7:34 am
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Good write up. Thank you
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: TeddingtonQuin
Date: January 29, 2020, 3:35 pm
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I'll be very honest and say that I didn't enjoy the write up as
I found it far too one sided. I like the report on the
Salarycens board
HTML https://www.rugbynetwork.net/boards/read/s104.htm?107,16720545
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Quins-Az
Date: January 30, 2020, 6:37 am
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that's fair enough, appreciate the feedback both of you - thanks
:)
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Grubs
Date: January 30, 2020, 7:50 am
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--- Quote from: Quins-Az link ---
>
> that's fair enough, appreciate the feedback both of you -
thanks :)
>
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In the spirit of positive criticism, you need to sort out the
dodgy punctuation.
And “could of...”?!
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: RodneyRegis
Date: January 31, 2020, 2:11 am
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Yes - get a proof-reader.
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: deadlyfrom5yardsout
Date: January 31, 2020, 3:27 am
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What is a proofhyphenreader?
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Quins-Az
Date: January 31, 2020, 4:43 am
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appreciate the feedback, this is what happens when I proofread
my own work
will get someone to proofread in future!
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: Grubs
Date: January 31, 2020, 5:43 am
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--- Quote from: Quins-Az link ---
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> appreciate the feedback, this is what happens when I proofread
my own work
>
> will get someone to proofread in future!
>
--- End Quote ---
🙂
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Re: Harlequins Vs Saracens Match Report
DIR By: stoquin
Date: January 31, 2020, 6:13 am
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Cricks, no wonder DOK struggles to find people to write match
reports, tough crowd!!!
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