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Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 7, 2012, 8:55 pm
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HTML http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R3LYvURweWQ
See warning in the video, I really mean it. Also HD is a must,
sorry to press this, but otherwise the quality is just not worth
it. Also, if it starts skipping and lagging, please restart, or
pause and allow it to catch up to itself. It seems to be a
little temperamental.
Besides that, I would really like you amazing editors to
critique this. It's for a project, a huge project.
It's a group project. Each group chose a charity and were told
to create a presentation based upon that charity. Each of the
groups would compete against each other to see which
presentation was the best in the class. The finalists will then
go on to "battle" the other finalists from the other classes in
my grade.
The winner gets 5000 dollars for their charity. Yes, $5000.
So this is a pretty big deal. And the project required a
artistic component. So I did a video.
My charity runs a online anon forum, and counselling to help
people deal with all kind of issues, like the ones in the video,
and I thought this would be the intro to our presentation.
And I would REALLY appreciate critique, what you liked, what you
didn't like, if there is anything I should add, take away, or
change?
It would be REALLY appreciated! :D
Also, if you think this is too strong to show to my class
(grade11), please let me know!
#Post#: 1124--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: 2Belle26
Date: January 7, 2012, 10:36 pm
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...wow. This was amazing! It totally got the message across, and
was presented in such an interesting way. Reminds me of the F*in
Perfect music video actually. But this video puts the fact out
there that people commit suicide because of so many reasons, a
lot of them having to do with their peers. I wouldn't change
this at all. Amazing job well done. :)
#Post#: 1127--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 7, 2012, 10:44 pm
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Thank you!
#Post#: 1128--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: FrenchToastAwsome
Date: January 7, 2012, 11:26 pm
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I really think I received the message I was supposed to here.
I think MAYBe one thing you could change is the length of the
clips just a TINY bit. There were some clips where it was more
of a... Different? Shot, and I couldn't tell right away what it
was about, but it moved too fast so I couldn't tell. That's just
a MAYBE though. This is excellent. I would keep it just the way
it is.
And maybe you should keep the aspect ratio of the video the same
for the whole video, or consistent parts of it if the "movie"
effect is needed. :)
#Post#: 1129--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 7, 2012, 11:28 pm
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Okay, thanks for the critique!
Yeah, I totally forgot that some were full screen and some were
widescreen XD I'm definitely going to be fixing that!
#Post#: 1135--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: CartoonInvasions
Date: January 8, 2012, 5:57 am
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Wow this was totally amazing there's all this effect that gives
this this amazing look, then out of no-where you tell us about
for the time to watch this video, really got me surprised and
quite dad at that thought. it was totally un-expected and a real
eye opened to that idea. I love this idea of the grey scale and
the slowness. There was one part seemed a tad of from 0.42-47,
it's in that section where there seems to be an extra beat what
ever we'll call it, it with they boy on the chair, i think,
right i hope this helps. and i hope you do a great job
#Post#: 1138--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 8, 2012, 12:56 pm
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Oh wow, THANK YOU! I really appreciate that feedback!
Oh, I know what the issue is, one of the beats is a tiny bit
early, I'll see if I can fix it.
Thank you once again!
#Post#: 1142--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: CartoonInvasions
Date: January 8, 2012, 1:10 pm
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yeah don't find me so picky bit with beats sadly i am, anyway
your welcome
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Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 8, 2012, 1:17 pm
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No, that's fine, picky is always betterXD
#Post#: 1218--------------------------------------------------
Re: Critique would REALLY be appreciated for this!
DIR By: hydrazoite
Date: January 11, 2012, 6:05 pm
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Thanks guys for all the critique! The presentation went really
well! I hope I go to the next round! <3
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