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Liliy Yoaimoto
By: Liliy Date: September 10, 2012, 5:35 pm
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Name: Liliy Yoaimoto
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Rank:
Look:
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Bio: Liliy grow up in a basic small town. She was always a
outcast to everyone. To her she was a normal kid and everyone
one else was weird. One would say she is abit....abnormal. This
is only due to her....ability. She has a very strong connection
to those who are no longer with us. She can see spirits, Feel
them , summon them, interact with them ect. She found this to be
normal that everyone should be born with this ability. About a
year ago she became interested in chess. She began challenging
old chessmasters. They said she was queen amongest chess. When a
year pasted she heard about Checkmate. She decided that she
would make their words true. That one day she will become the
queen.
Personality: Fun, Quiet, Energetic, Interesting, Weird , Can
have a smart mouth, Intelligent and Optimistic
Goals: To one day become the queen
Rival:
Stats: 200
Strenth: 50
Defense: 33
Speed: 34
Stamina: 33
Weapon: 50
Armor: Knight
Weapon:
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: King Date: September 10, 2012, 6:01 pm
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id like you to change it up abit actually. she can see ghosts.
it could be an entertaining quirk to see her talking to the air.
but usage, summoning... no no. its not that kind of board. an
occasional helpful hint from nowhere is fine, but thats as far
as using her ability should go. also, please just fix some of
those typos and grammer errors. im no grammer nazi, but alittle
structure never hurt anyone.
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: King Date: September 10, 2012, 6:07 pm
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actually, the helpfulness part... maybe more of a slight psycic
power. knowing the path through a maze without knowing why. but
again, the vast majority of your 'psycic powers' will not be
allowed to affect your battles.
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: Liliy Date: September 10, 2012, 6:12 pm
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I won't use the sommoning in the board at all I just though it
would make sense in her story But believe I WILL NEVER US
SOMMONIG in this ever
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: King Date: September 10, 2012, 6:26 pm
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kk. as long as it dosnt become much more than a quirk with the
character, your good. your rank will be P11.
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: Liliy Date: September 10, 2012, 6:30 pm
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Yea make fun of the different girl :P
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Re: Liliy Yoaimoto
By: King Date: September 10, 2012, 6:33 pm
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tis how the world works lol
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