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willing to teach <3
DIR By: swifty
Date: October 2, 2013, 6:07 pm
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I am willing to teach anyone that feels they need help with
their role-playing. I consider myself at least semi-advanced, if
not advanced, as I started writing when I was very young and my
writing developed from there, even if I hadn't grown an interest
in it until I was about nine years old, when I wrote and
finished my first properly-lengthed story.
If you would like a sample of my writing you can look through my
posts or just read this:
[spoiler][sub]the sudden realisation that the cat she had known
as handsome and kind was her father had shook the poor
spicedpaw. sometimes truth was cruel--crueller than lies that
would make her life the perfect fantasy she had always hoped
for. usually love was something she would scorn, for she
believed in no such thing that many cats had called 'true love'.
she believed that it was myths and tales that simply made cats
feel better about themselves.
well, boy had she just been proved wrong about that.
spice was lying in the apprentices' den, her eyes squeezed shut
and her claws digging into the moist soil, ears flat against her
head. many would think she were having a bad nightmare, one they
would not dare to wake her from, but instead the nightmare was
real. it was alive. the one cat she had actually hoped to start
a life with--however much she had tried to avoid it, both in her
head and in reality--had been related to her. had been her
father. for a moment she felt a burning anger towards her mother
for not telling her and her siblings sooner, but it was soon
blown away when she realised that it was just to protect them.
from the truth.
carefully spicedpaw got to her paws and navigated around the
various cats that lay sprawled in their nests. luck was in her
way and she managed to escape from it without waking anyone, and
then carefully padded through the reeds, their fronds tickling
her ears. no one heard her or, for the time being, noticed her
absence. hopefully they wouldn't be suspicious of anything--she
hadn't planned to do anything out of the ordinary, just have a
wander to clear her heard of all the scattered and confused
thoughts that were strewn through her head untidily.[/spoiler]
#Post#: 1003--------------------------------------------------
Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: bird
Date: October 3, 2013, 9:48 am
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[center]umm. i might need some help :)[/center]
#Post#: 1010--------------------------------------------------
Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: ravenmist101
Date: October 4, 2013, 9:31 am
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I would like some help also.
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: swifty
Date: October 5, 2013, 5:31 pm
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[sub]okay then! <3
can you give me a role-play sample?
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: ravenmist101
Date: October 6, 2013, 5:21 am
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um okay.
The sleek figure of a feline pranced by. His ginger pelt was
fluffed out like a squirrel's tail. Skulduggerypleasant was out
on a kit raid, accompanied by his sister, Aftereight. They
neared the other clan's entrance and fell into a slow jog.
"Aftereight, how do you suggest we do this?" Skully asked.
Aftereight didn't reply with speech, just a shrug of her
shoulders.
now my muse is done.
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: swifty
Date: October 10, 2013, 3:58 pm
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[sub]well, it looks like you're a pretty advanced role-player.
i'm not sure if you know this already, because name's have a
capital letter at the front, but if you're continuing on the
sentence after a question mark you don't put a capital letter
there. but 'skully' is a name and therefore needs a capital
letter.
okay, so if i were to improve this paragraph i would start by
making the first two sentences more lengthy. maybe try to
combine them, or add more detail to them? what would you do if
you were making them more lengthy?
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: Lil
Date: October 10, 2013, 4:00 pm
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[center]I'd like some help.[/center]
#Post#: 1154--------------------------------------------------
Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: swifty
Date: October 10, 2013, 4:04 pm
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[sub]sure! could you give me an rp sample, too?
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: Lil
Date: October 10, 2013, 4:16 pm
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[center]Blue orbs peered out of the overgrowth, glinting coldly
in the pale moonlight. And after a few moments, a pretty cream
point darted out of the scenery. The female was acting
suspicious . . . Very suspicious. Who was she by the way? She
was dubbed Tragedy, after a horrible event in her history. But
that's not important right now. She was here for some . . .
PetrichorClan, was it? Oh, well, she would memorize the name
eventually. And soon, she was at her final destination.[/center]
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Re: willing to teach <3
DIR By: ravenmist101
Date: October 11, 2013, 1:26 pm
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uhm i could join them up.
and skully does have a capital letter...
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