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       In the Middle (Middlerunner, Complete)
   DIR By: Minutepaw
       Date: September 17, 2013, 8:22 pm
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       Username;; Minutepaw
       Character's Name;; Middlerunner
       Gender && Sexuality;; Female, hererosexual
       Species;; Cat
       Alliance;; Reverieclan
       Rank;; Knight
       Appearance;; Mid is a very smoky grey tabby cat. She has almost
       black paws, and black stripes. Her eyes are a very pale sea
       green. Everything about Mid is long or tall. She's tall, she has
       a long tail, long whiskers, and long fur. Everything about her
       is also often messy, as she hardly bothers to clean herself. She
       thinks it takes too much time.
       Personality;; Middlerunner is most often curious yet calm,
       wanting to learn about everything but taking her time to ask all
       the questions she needs to until she understands it. She tends
       to be optimistic, and tries to see the good in everyone. Mid
       also is one of those cats that loves jumping in every mud puddle
       in sight or splash in the rain, and she only really cleans
       herself once every half moon, or when other cats tell her she
       has to.
       History;; Middlerunner was born into the Clan, like most Clan
       cats. She spent a lot of her time as a kit learning about
       everything she could, from battle tactics to herbs, and these
       helped when a hawk tried to carry her off and she barely
       escaped. Mid  continued her life like any normal cat, but she
       still carries the talon marks from the hawk today, and freaks
       out whenever there's a large bird of prey in the sky.
       Other;; None.
       #Post#: 2528--------------------------------------------------
       Re: In the Middle (Middlerunner, Complete)
   DIR By: GRYPHON.
       Date: January 10, 2014, 3:19 am
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       -- everything about her is also often messy
       doesn't sound quite right c:
       perhaps you could have started it with; "her fur is also quite
       messy"
       instead of starting a sentence with the same word as the last.
       Mid  continued her life like any normal cat
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