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#Post#: 475--------------------------------------------------
Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 10:45 am
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In-Game Name:Jarett Carter
Playing Hours:6
Name of the Gang you wish to create:Los Santos Crime Cartel
Co-Leader(s) (Optional):None
Family Story (Minimum of 300):The Los Santos Crime Cartel, known
as Carter's Cartel an criminal mafia which has been created as
syndicate from Davido Sphonzo at Los Santos, has been converted
on USA, Los Santos as American Mafia called The Los Santos Crime
Cartel after the leadership of Jarett Carter Davido's right
hand, he moved to Los Santos and changed the Cartel Style.
Being A part of the syndicate - l
Jarett Carter, 2003 21 may. Jarett was looking for a job, and
was checking newspaper for any advertisements for employement.
After viewing the newspaper for the third time he was interested
in a company called Italian Productive. He wanted to work as
normal worker, and all he had was skills for Restaurant and Bar,
so they took him inside their bar as bartner. After working for
weeks the owner of bars was about to introduce Jarett in their
syndicate, and invite him inside, Jarett was also so interested
in this job, after the owner told him about the organization,
being part of mafia syndicate, with his semi-consciousness about
what going to happen with him on the organization
The Right Hand - ll
After his murders, drug trafficing, heists, and assisting his
own boss, soon, he was promoted to Caporegime and got his
respect rank heavly. But he wanted more respect, more nearby the
boss, so he and his friends planned for murder of the Right Hand
which was Antonio Semacuci the best friend of boss Davido
Sphozo. They planned to increase Jarett's rank to Right Hand, so
he could kill the boss too and can have the Syndicate and move
the whole Cartel to Los Santos. The murder and death of the
right hand has been already, now Jarett was right hand and they
were planning the next move.
Family Cars (8 in total):
-Sentinel
-Sentinel
-Sentinel
-Huntley
-Huntley
-Huntley
-Maverick
-Infernus
Color of the Gang Vehicles (Color ID):000
Family ranks:
6 -Don/God Father
5 -Underboss
4 -Right Hand
3-Capo
2 -Soilder
1 -Associate
Family Skins (maximum of 8 skins):171, 170, 185, 186 and 20
Family HeadQuarters (Take a ScreenShot, or describe the
location):
HTML http://www.upload.ee/image/4351096/sa-mp-693.png
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Hudson Date: November 9, 2014, 11:00 am
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Unsupport, lack of effort mainly.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 11:10 am
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That's your opinion.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Michael_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 11:37 am
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Lack of effort. But I know you (I'm Benjo Black), and I know you
are good. You have my support. I will let the other gang
moderators to post their opinion.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Austin_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 11:53 am
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Make a little longer story then I will consider this.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 12:12 pm
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The story contains 283 words.
The Los Santos Crime Cartel, known as Carter's Cartel an
criminal mafia which has been created as syndicate from Davido
Sphonzo at Los Santos, has been converted on USA, Los Santos as
American Mafia called The Los Santos Crime Cartel after the
leadership of Jarett Carter Davido's right hand, he moved to Los
Santos and changed the Cartel Style.
Jarett Carter, 2003 21 may. Jarett was looking for a job, and
was checking newspaper for any advertisements for employement.
After viewing the newspaper for the third time he was interested
in a company called Italian Productive. He wanted to work as
normal worker, and all he had was skills for Restaurant and Bar,
so they took him inside their bar as bartner. After working for
weeks the owner of bars was about to introduce Jarett in their
syndicate, and invite him inside, Jarett was also so interested
in this job, after the owner told him about the organization,
being part of mafia syndicate, with his semi-consciousness about
what going to happen with him on the organization
After his murders, drug trafficing, heists, and assisting his
own boss, soon, he was promoted to Caporegime and got his
respect rank heavly. But he wanted more respect, more nearby the
boss, so he and his friends planned for murder of the Right Hand
which was Antonio Semacuci the best friend of boss Davido
Sphozo. They planned to increase Jarett's rank to Right Hand, so
he could kill the boss too and can have the Syndicate and move
the whole Cartel to Los Santos. The murder and death of the
right hand has been already, now Jarett was right hand and they
were planning the next move.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Michael_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 12:48 pm
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Finish the story, add one more paragraph and it will be good.
The story has a good beginning, make a good plot now.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 3:16 pm
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L&A, joined a faction.
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Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
By: Austin_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 3:26 pm
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Locked on request.
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