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       #Post#: 475--------------------------------------------------
       Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 10:45 am
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       In-Game Name:Jarett Carter
       Playing Hours:6
       Name of the Gang you wish to create:Los Santos Crime Cartel
       Co-Leader(s) (Optional):None
       Family Story (Minimum of 300):The Los Santos Crime Cartel, known
       as Carter's Cartel an criminal mafia which has been created as
       syndicate from Davido Sphonzo at Los Santos, has been converted
       on USA, Los Santos as American Mafia called The Los Santos Crime
       Cartel after the leadership of Jarett Carter Davido's right
       hand, he moved to Los Santos and changed the Cartel Style.
       Being A part of the syndicate - l
       Jarett Carter, 2003 21 may. Jarett was looking for a job, and
       was checking newspaper for any advertisements for employement.
       After viewing the newspaper for the third time he was interested
       in a company called Italian Productive. He wanted to work as
       normal worker, and all he had was skills for Restaurant and Bar,
       so they took him inside their bar as bartner. After working for
       weeks the owner of bars was about to introduce Jarett in their
       syndicate, and invite him inside, Jarett was also so interested
       in this job, after the owner told him about the organization,
       being part of mafia syndicate, with his semi-consciousness about
       what going to happen with him on the organization
       The Right Hand - ll
       After his murders, drug trafficing, heists, and assisting his
       own boss, soon, he was promoted to Caporegime and got his
       respect rank heavly. But he wanted more respect, more nearby the
       boss, so he and his friends planned for murder of the Right Hand
       which was Antonio Semacuci the best friend of boss Davido
       Sphozo. They planned to increase Jarett's rank to Right Hand, so
       he could kill the boss too and can have the Syndicate and move
       the whole Cartel to Los Santos. The murder and death of the
       right hand has been already, now Jarett was right hand and they
       were planning the next move.
       Family Cars (8 in total):
       -Sentinel
       -Sentinel
       -Sentinel
       -Huntley
       -Huntley
       -Huntley
       -Maverick
       -Infernus
       Color of the Gang Vehicles (Color ID):000
       Family ranks:
       6 -Don/God Father
       5 -Underboss
       4 -Right Hand
       3-Capo
       2 -Soilder
       1 -Associate
       Family Skins (maximum of 8 skins):171, 170, 185, 186 and 20
       Family HeadQuarters (Take a ScreenShot, or describe the
       location):
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       #Post#: 477--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Hudson Date: November 9, 2014, 11:00 am
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       Unsupport, lack of effort mainly.
       #Post#: 478--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 11:10 am
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       That's your opinion.
       #Post#: 480--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Michael_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 11:37 am
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       Lack of effort. But I know you (I'm Benjo Black), and I know you
       are good. You have my support. I will let the other gang
       moderators to post their opinion.
       #Post#: 484--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Austin_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 11:53 am
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       Make a little longer story then I will consider this.
       #Post#: 485--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 12:12 pm
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       The story contains 283 words.
       The Los Santos Crime Cartel, known as Carter's Cartel an
       criminal mafia which has been created as syndicate from Davido
       Sphonzo at Los Santos, has been converted on USA, Los Santos as
       American Mafia called The Los Santos Crime Cartel after the
       leadership of Jarett Carter Davido's right hand, he moved to Los
       Santos and changed the Cartel Style.
       Jarett Carter, 2003 21 may. Jarett was looking for a job, and
       was checking newspaper for any advertisements for employement.
       After viewing the newspaper for the third time he was interested
       in a company called Italian Productive. He wanted to work as
       normal worker, and all he had was skills for Restaurant and Bar,
       so they took him inside their bar as bartner. After working for
       weeks the owner of bars was about to introduce Jarett in their
       syndicate, and invite him inside, Jarett was also so interested
       in this job, after the owner told him about the organization,
       being part of mafia syndicate, with his semi-consciousness about
       what going to happen with him on the organization
       After his murders, drug trafficing, heists, and assisting his
       own boss, soon, he was promoted to Caporegime and got his
       respect rank heavly. But he wanted more respect, more nearby the
       boss, so he and his friends planned for murder of the Right Hand
       which was Antonio Semacuci the best friend of boss Davido
       Sphozo. They planned to increase Jarett's rank to Right Hand, so
       he could kill the boss too and can have the Syndicate and move
       the whole Cartel to Los Santos. The murder and death of the
       right hand has been already, now Jarett was right hand and they
       were planning the next move.
       #Post#: 487--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Michael_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 12:48 pm
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       Finish the story, add one more paragraph and it will be good.
       The story has a good beginning, make a good plot now.
       #Post#: 495--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Kosovar Date: November 9, 2014, 3:16 pm
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       L&A, joined a faction.
       #Post#: 496--------------------------------------------------
       Re: Los Santos Crime Cartel
       By: Austin_Hamilton Date: November 9, 2014, 3:26 pm
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       Locked on request.
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