DIR Return Create A Forum - Home
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       A Phoenix Risen
  HTML https://aphoenixrisen.createaforum.com
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       *****************************************************
   DIR Return to: Poetry/Literature
       *****************************************************
       #Post#: 183--------------------------------------------------
       [Sonnet] End of Our Lives
       By: Zumosmorph Date: October 18, 2011, 9:22 pm
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       This is sonnet I had to write for my 10th grade English class.
       I wrote it the night before it was due and think it turned out
       pretty good, so here it is!  It needs a better title, so if you
       wanna help me out...
       [center]End of Our Lives
       When the world turns black, I know it is time.
       The beasts of the gods shall fall from the sky.
       The heavens hath blessed these monsters, divine,
       and on the ground we stand, all the shall die.
       Thunder and lighting, the pain in the eyes
       Darkness approaches on this fearful night.
       Death is forever, but souls now arise?
       Buildings crumble at the awe of their might!
       Ruins remain at the end of the day
       as spirits rise on to the afterlife.
       All things are scattered, complete disaray
       and the world is no longer full of strife.
       The gods plant the seeds of life in the dew
       as the sky clears and the world starts anew.[/center]
       #Post#: 211--------------------------------------------------
       Re: [Sonnet] End of Our Lives
       By: Veranex Date: October 19, 2011, 9:13 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       Wow, Z, that is really good. ^^ I'm impressed!
       #Post#: 1657--------------------------------------------------
       Re: [Sonnet] End of Our Lives
       By: Lady Greydawn Date: March 18, 2012, 6:58 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       [font=georgia]I like that! Very nice job. As for your asking
       about a new title... since the sonnet ends with life starting
       anew... How about entitling it "The End?"[/font]
       #Post#: 1667--------------------------------------------------
       Re: [Sonnet] End of Our Lives
       By: Faerdin Date: March 19, 2012, 1:04 am
       ---------------------------------------------------------
       Shakespearean Sonnets are kind of hard to make because it can be
       difficult at times to make sure there are only ten syllables in
       each line and such, but you did an excellent job with it. I
       haven't seen anything like this from you on the Forums before,
       but I want to see more now. o;
       *****************************************************